Currently Reading #2 (cont #2)
Sep. 11th, 2013 02:09 pm![[identity profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/openid.png)
It's a shame the book title isn't the other way round, because then I could have given my thoughts on Crosses and Noughts.
Okay. Shut up with your stupid jokes, littlerdog, and talk about the book.
Noughts and Crosses is an engaging, enjoyable book. It's also something of a challenge to a reader like myself who's always lived in an environment where domination by whites is pervasive. I had enormous difficulty visualising the Crosses as black. I'm not sure I even managed it. And that in itself makes me hesitant to offer any criticism. I had problems with the book, but for the most part those problems lie within myself, not within the book. And that's a hard admission to make, especially as a Guardian-reading bleeding heart white liberal.
The book is light on description, but that wasn't a problem as I often find description bogs a story down. It focused on what I like to focus on: the interactions between characters, their thoughts and feelings. At times it was a bit repetitive, perhaps not surprising for such a long book. Callum comments more than once on how his sister Lynette relieved his anger and anxiety, but I don't recall a scene in which we're shown this actually happening. Less tell and more show would have suited me better. But I'm not the target audience here, so my preferences are perhaps irrelevant.
Sometimes the book seemed to pass too lightly over major life events that I can't help feeling would have had far more impact on the characters than we see. This is a tricky balance to keep, in my experience--no life events and the story feels flat, too much emphasis on a particular event and the story bogs down. Blackman works hard to keep the story moving along so perhaps that's why the two protagonists aren't as twisted out of shape emotionally as I'd expect them to be.
The book's approach to the protagonists works well: we hear from Sephy, then Callum, then Sephy, then Callum, sometimes going over previous events from the other POV, sometimes progressing to new events. It's well paced and holds the attention.
Overall, a damn good book.
(Oh, and I did read the prologue, which I don't usually. And it was completely unnecessary.)
Okay. Shut up with your stupid jokes, littlerdog, and talk about the book.
Noughts and Crosses is an engaging, enjoyable book. It's also something of a challenge to a reader like myself who's always lived in an environment where domination by whites is pervasive. I had enormous difficulty visualising the Crosses as black. I'm not sure I even managed it. And that in itself makes me hesitant to offer any criticism. I had problems with the book, but for the most part those problems lie within myself, not within the book. And that's a hard admission to make, especially as a Guardian-reading bleeding heart white liberal.
The book is light on description, but that wasn't a problem as I often find description bogs a story down. It focused on what I like to focus on: the interactions between characters, their thoughts and feelings. At times it was a bit repetitive, perhaps not surprising for such a long book. Callum comments more than once on how his sister Lynette relieved his anger and anxiety, but I don't recall a scene in which we're shown this actually happening. Less tell and more show would have suited me better. But I'm not the target audience here, so my preferences are perhaps irrelevant.
Sometimes the book seemed to pass too lightly over major life events that I can't help feeling would have had far more impact on the characters than we see. This is a tricky balance to keep, in my experience--no life events and the story feels flat, too much emphasis on a particular event and the story bogs down. Blackman works hard to keep the story moving along so perhaps that's why the two protagonists aren't as twisted out of shape emotionally as I'd expect them to be.
The book's approach to the protagonists works well: we hear from Sephy, then Callum, then Sephy, then Callum, sometimes going over previous events from the other POV, sometimes progressing to new events. It's well paced and holds the attention.
Overall, a damn good book.
(Oh, and I did read the prologue, which I don't usually. And it was completely unnecessary.)